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In Cameo's Refrain
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In Cameo's Refrain |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In Cameo's Refrain In mirrors glance, distorted I whose lines of aging walk the face. Overcast emotions guide, a cameo of loves disgrace. To test the time of never was remorsing all the want to be. Depressed by time that left its mark betrayed by mind, the sane of me. Catching shadows in the dark as thunder reigns, its strike is heard. My secrets buried, layered deep in thoughts desired, need deferred. Hear my words, the tune they play, a saddened beat, in rhythm drain. The myst has reached its fatal touch I'm always there, in my refrain. Phantom me in moonlight's full each passing brings a sliver less, until the crescent disappears and I reside in dark caress. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - as always... BC |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Beautiful write!! I enjoyed this one VERY MUCH!!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Catching shadows in the dark as thunder reigns, its strike is heard. My secrets buried, layered deep in thoughts desired, need deferred. Very lovely and well written, Maureen.  ~ warm hugsLyra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart this is exquisite writing, you have a way of making your words dance in measured steps and stately grace down the page. Truly perfectly presented and beautifully written, I love this one it is exceptionally good. Wonderful writing darling heart utterly utterly wonderful   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maureen, again you speak of my heartfelt thoughts. Amazing how much we all have in common, isn't it. This is so well done, and the use of "cameo", perfect.. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
BC so glad you are back.. hugs M Krishankins...thank you for your very kind words *s M Madame...hugs right back at you...nice to see you so cheerful *s warmly, M Marsha, You are truly warm and mushy and I love you that way.*s hugs M Sandra, I do believe that many of us have lived similar lives...and I am sure there is much happiness still to partake in. hugs M |
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