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brian sites
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0 posted 2002-08-03 12:47 PM


rapture focused lightning
      like a needle
         to the spine
frozen mental tapestry
      revealing new
         design
the thawing image bubbles up
      till married to my skin
filling the cracks of weathered life
      that I resided in

freedom from the measured step
      the breathing down
         my neck
laughing at the Salesman
      as I write the
         final check
the meaning of the mirror mask
      will not escape my grin
the glass of glitter shattering
      the panes embedded in

feeling the power of sun on my face
knowing the minutes are slowing my pace
floating in story of evident grace
      I read between the lines
feeling the minutes of evident grace
knowing the story of sun on my face
floating: the power of slowing my pace
      I'm free of all disguise



I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,
1 posted 2002-08-03 02:21 AM


Great??? I really like it..
I will be waiting to read more..

good luck,,


Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2002-08-03 02:33 AM


Very Nice.
This leaves me thinking just how short life is.

WhileIWasGone
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since 2002-07-18
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3 posted 2002-08-03 10:22 AM


Brian this is great!!!

Enjoyed much
DeaDiAmore

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-08-03 10:28 AM


brian,
Well done good palette, enjoyed.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2002-08-03 11:02 AM


very very nice  

M

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