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WhileIWasGone
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since 2002-07-18
Posts 486


0 posted 2002-08-02 11:33 PM



Slip

If caresses were silk
would you
could you
weave me


if wishes could touch
would you
could you
feel me


If want could speak
would you
could you
hear me


if whispers were kisses
would you
could you
taste me


If desire could see
would you
could you
know me


if night were flesh
would you
could you
slip off your daydreams
and wear me ?


If my heart called
would you
could you
let yourself answer
and have me?



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brian sites
Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
1 posted 2002-08-03 12:27 PM


Dea, you and wranx
were seamless.
Don't know who was who
so this was truly a duet.
wonderfully done!
perhaps more duets?
BS

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

Samantha G Kennedy
Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131
Kent England
2 posted 2002-08-03 02:01 AM


a wonderful Collaboration!!!


Muchly enjoyed this!


Sammie

^i^

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