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In Response to the Phantom Walks the Halls of Blue, by Magnus
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In Response to the Phantom Walks the Halls of Blue, by Magnus |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
 In Response to the Phantom Walks I heard the step, and shadows dare As my heart leapt, to show my care A whisper'd word, are you still there? I heard the step, and shadows dare. Oh blue walls of Passion, please Draw my love's sigh in the breeze And let him know that he may seize, Oh blue walls of Passion, please! The step it lingered, then fell quiet My heart it faltered, then in riot It beat so loudly, that he should hear it! The step, it lingered, then fell quiet. Did he hear this beating heart? The one that began in earnest start For it was by the love that he would impart Did he hear, did he hear, this beating heart? But lo, the steps now fall away My head is bowed, what can I say? 'Tis not our time, nor is it our day... And lo, the steps now fall away... Oh, Passion’s Walls, hear this, my cry That he would not linger to hear my sigh And heavy now this heart, goodbye, As Passion’s Walls hear this, my cry. [This message has been edited by Lady In White (08-02-2002 04:16 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh, Passion’s Walls, hear this, my cry That he would not linger to hear my sigh And heavy now this heart, goodbye, As Passion’s Walls hear this, my cry. --------------------------------------------- Ah dear Lady...so nice to read you again. I love your response to the Phantom Walks. This is a lovely expression of love and longing. Very beautifully penned m'dear. ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tis but a mome', a memory Tis but a second you see as I walk these blue halls no shadow gracing the walls Come to me my fairest maid with thy beauty most displayed Let thy hair fall before thee Let my arms hold most tenderly For thy art most fair of all as I walk the blue, this hall Take my arm and we shall dance Take it now, is but one chance [This message has been edited by Magnus (08-02-2002 04:35 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Cool Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Lady In White - a great response to a great poem... BC |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I am lost for words, just amazing. This evokes such a mood. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo sad but wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, I can tell Barry enjoys this so very much as I do, this is a true expression of yearning and desire, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I know your heartbeat my heart beats in tune with yours it shall always be Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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