Open Poetry #21 |
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handfasting -- born at dawn |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA ![]() |
for serenity -- may the circle always be yours dawn beginnings it is here that they have come the Lord and the Lady the Sun and the Moon they are here now, around us their rays reach out and touch one another they whisper their words and secrets of love on the wind here, now, they become one two halves of the same whole One Light dawn beginnings it is here that we have come you and I our hearts and souls we are here now, with them our hands reach out and touch one another we speak the words and promises of love for all to hear here, now, we become one two parts of the same being One Love dawn beginnings I take your hand in mine my own, I give to you the circle now complete my hand I give to you your own, I take in mine the circle now complete the circle now complete we shall walk its path round and round as Moon and Sun dance and play and share their Light we shall walk, hand in hand joined as one along this Life go now, new ones, and walk the path hand in hand and on and on and, never forget, should darkness come that love is forever born at dawn ---------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Amen Sven, and so very beautiful. Karen will love this. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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skyshine![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is a beautiful poem for Serenity. Very well written. ![]() ~sky You look inside my wild mind |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - my friend, you are simply amazing with your writings... BC |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This should have been read for the wedding! Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sven, this is a most exquisite wedding vow. Beautifully penned as only you can do.. and I am sure Serenity and her husband will treasure forever. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is such a beautiful wedding gift that I know Karen and her soulmate will always cherish, I too wish with you the greatest happiness for them both! (smiles) This is a beautiful timeless gift, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey John--pssst...sneaking in here while I have a minute to say thank you--(I'm supposed to be in the shower!) but thank you so much for this--yer a doll! and? it seems I have been kidnapped for a bit, but I'll be back soon. (I think) Hugs and and thank you! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I don't know that the Serene one will ever be back...between the shower and the showers...LOL... but aside from that, Sven, you did a mighty fine job with this one... |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thanks everyone. . . thought that I forgot didn't you Karen?? ![]() besides. . . I had to do this one. . . it just had to be written. . . and now, make sure you turn off the water. . . LOL ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
![]() Vows? This is exquisite. I'd like to hear it out loud. ![]() I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. [This message has been edited by Temptress (08-14-2002 01:18 AM).] |
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