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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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where walks the solo sung utterance of concurrence in unison of coincidences two or three legged on galloped wheels down the uphill side of progression's drift without keel side familiar to sea tide lifting bring it salty sanded to harmonize consonance unfreezed, unthawed, melting danced perhaps with panting gasps of respire effed at glancing stance billow puffed with whoop bang pensive and do we jazz our songs with indifference wistful wasteful rumination in gimcrack pants we water the lawns of our cheeks by hand and talk to winds of dry unconsciousness simitranced we garble the god of word in chant we bucket our solace from the well of repentence and our indicisions are on callused cleavage spent. ©Dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-02-2002 09:01 AM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I had to read this a couple of times but once I figured ya out...I liked it strange one... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks toz'...just saying that not doing stuff..and spending lot of time thinking about it is usless as ....well anyway |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Tanfastic stuff here Dark! Superb writer you are!! For sure.. ~slow morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enchantress..thanks lil lady, damn prozac and viagra are acting up again...guess I should stop them for a bit especially if I am gonna smoke that darn hemp after the jack dan runs out.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Get thee back to the heart pound sounds and hammer metal moon till it shines... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger An amalgamation of fragile, enjoyed. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Your words are a work of art to read, spoken, a song. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
where walks the solo sung utterance of concurrence in unison of coincidences two or three legged on galloped wheels down the uphill side of progression's drift without keel side familiar to sea tide lifting bring it salty sanded to harmonize consonance unfreezed, unthawed, melting danced perhaps with panting gasps of respire effed at glancing stance billow puffed with whoop bang pensive and do we jazz our songs with indifference ============================== DOING MOTH HAPPY DANCE ... WOO HOO...  Look at you playing with your poetry. Look at the RHYME...the alliterations, the assonance..the word play...the vocab, phrasing and verbiage...look at the WHOOP BANG LOL WAAAAY COOL DS ... love this side of your poetry...me thinks ya gots lots of hidden talents  Tell me we belong together |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sunshine, thanks to you lady....hey, just being a nerd here..k? coffee or tea today? good morning to ya ms. sy, thanks for the read and reply guy, you always are a gent. martie, slow hugs in bubble wrap shirts to you lil neighbor. Thanks so much. janet marie...thanks to you lil lady, waz fun to dink with dem tunez a bit. I appreciate your appraisal with sinseared oglegoggles. (grin) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-02-2002 10:37 AM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is an ode to excellence DS!!! "we water the lawns of our cheeks by hand" you can take so simple a thing and make it beautiful... enjoyed this!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
devina, big old grabby handfuls of hugs to you ms, you are sweetcakes in syrup. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Hmmmm...and I thought you were a Yes man..I guess we all question things before we leap or do we? Anyways..you better catch good!giggle~ Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina jump babe, got my catcher's face on wearin a smile. thanks to you ms fine |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) And this is truly an ode to another remarkable classic to be added to your golden library, sweet friend, I love this, you are an inspiration to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
bring it salty sanded to harmonize consonance unfreezed, unthawed, melting danced perhaps with panting gasps of respire effed at glancing stance billow puffed with whoop bang pensive and do we jazz our songs with indifference (whispering) wow... great write here! Sammie ^i^ |
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