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The Promise
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The Promise |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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I'm afraid of the promise where it came from, where it's gone. On what level of your love was this promise made upon? Closed for so long wrapped up in your id this trite little promise was made rather quick. So I wonder about the words what they mean, what they say. Is this promise then forever, or just for today? WhiteRose |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I think it's human nature to wonder if promises are real, and if they will be remembered. This is a wonderful write, and brought some questions to mind..food for thought!! Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
another of the age old questions revisited... the way you said it here is a wonderful testament to the fact that each mind is unique. keep questioning, that's how we find answers Jason Practiced in the Art of Perception |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Wonderfully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wonder about those things too...good write! |
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