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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-08-01 05:13 AM


A Romantic Walk
In The Park?

To anyone who believes
that love is just
a romantic walk
in the park
I have some
choice words
to impart.

Yes it can be
a romantic walk
in the park.
It can also
be a mugging
in the park
after dark.

JamesLee
July29
2002



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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-08-01 10:00 PM


Yes JM,  in reality....after dark,  romance
is often dampened by the inner fear of
what else might happen...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-01 10:17 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh James, this is so very true, I believe the daytime is the special time to go for your love in the park, but at night, better stay safe at home and have a candlelight dinner or something! (sigh) You always understand true love so well, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-08-01 10:34 PM


These words are so true

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2002-08-02 12:53 PM


James - true, very true are your words...

BC

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-08-04 04:00 AM


Thank you Magnus, Noah, the loner 23 and Bill for the nice response...
Sometimes the path of love takes challenging turns...James

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