Open Poetry #21 |
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Walked Away |
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MomentzBefore Junior Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 31 |
Not looking back You walked away Leaving me with only A kiss Why does it have to be this way? I run Screaming Hoping you would look back But you never did The winds can blow Rain can fall Blood can drip From my eyez But you You will never look back To see what you've caused I run Unable to stop But still I can't catch up You're walking too fast For me to make you look back |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Looking Back He doesn't look back when he walks away no losing footing on his track he knows he can't stay I have a bad habit of looking back all the time losing footing, shoes don't fit hoping for what should be left behind I watch him with a teary-eyed gaze as he walks on without seeing he won't look back to this phase where I love him with all my being I stand and I yell and my voice starts to crack I ran, tripped and fell but he'll never look back. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
let's push this one through again and see if anyone reads it |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I run Unable to stop But still I can't catch up I'm glad you ran it through again. I missed it the first time. The helplessness of being left is portrayed deeply in this poem. A great write. Love Seduces Joy From The Heart |
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