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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. 
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I met her at a high school dance We felt a current flow between us Even though I knew we did'nt stand a chance She rode a caddie to school and I rode a bus Her father was rich and disaproved of me He told his daughter I was no good Dating was out of question you see We got together when ever we could Her dad bribed her with a brand new car All she had to do was never see me Our love died like a fading star I guess our true love was never to be paladin |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I know how that feels. Enjoyed! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, I guess not....when the car comes first....well, there are better fish out there to be caught.... |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Love may triumph over all.But not when your seventeen.I did get even with her.I built a great 54 ford "vicky" hot rod and took great pleasure parking next to her at the drive in. paladin |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Awww, I'm sorry her dad kept you and her apart back then, sweet friend, I hope now you have found true happiness and still you and her remian true friends and she has found true joy on her own as well! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great write Bob! So where is she now?? This happens so much when you're a teen, eh? And love hurts SO much when you're young.. when you're older as well too... but, oh dear I'm rambling.... good stuff you've been writing lately... keep up the great work. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Paladin, in the eyes of the true beholder, you'll be a priceless gift...definitely beyond the value of numerous cars combined. *hugs* mycafe Keep counting your blessings [This message has been edited by mycafe (08-01-2002 02:00 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
you opened up a treasure chest of other ideas again Paladin..like the early relationships I had...money and having status was a big issue..nice write  |
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