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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-07-30 06:45 PM

Even now within the emptiness
that was left in your wake,
I sense your essence close to me
with each new breath I take.

I crave again your gentle touch,
your kisses on my skin.
I long to have your body
held close to mine again.

Even as the sighs escaped
as you took me to new heights,
I couldn't discharge the loneliness,
of this approaching night.

I'll wait to hear your voice again
like some school girl with a crush.
I'll wait my love, I'll wait for you
to share the lover's rush.

WhiteRose 07/02

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (07-30-2002 06:59 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-07-30 06:57 PM

(sigh) Awwwwwww, such a sweet yearning fills these words, sweet friend, and may that sweet love again seek your heart and make you smile like that schoolgirl again feeling loves first kiss! (smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2002-07-30 07:23 PM

Hello Anne

Such beautiful words of love and longing that were so much enjoyed by this reader. I'll look forward to reading more.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

3 posted 2002-07-30 09:36 PM

Awww, so sweet, gentle and lovely!!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-07-30 10:02 PM

Sweetness

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2002-07-30 11:35 PM

Well said.
Very well done. ThisDiamond

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2002-07-30 11:51 PM

Whiterose, I like your take on La Petite Morte.

Thanks

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.

Bukowski

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2002-07-31 12:48 PM

Beautiful work, WR... I enjoyed very much. *S*

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

8 posted 2002-07-31 01:41 PM

Sweet and romantic!

Neeraja

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

9 posted 2002-07-31 01:45 PM

Thank you all for the wonderful comments. I wrote this yesterday after my husband went back out on the road for another 5 weeks before I see him again.

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