Open Poetry #21 |
Silent Thoughts of Two (Me and a Muse) |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A boundless love of treasure keep from waters still yet flowing deep A heart devoted to love for life through moments hard, in times of strife. Do not beg my eyes to roam by loss of pleasure in our home from careless word tossed to the air. Do not beg my eyes go there. The touch of eyes in passion’s glance. Not knowing this to be one’s chance. A kiss bestowed upon one’s face. A nail in trail of lover’s trace. Remember vows, one to the other and wish me well as if another person stood before your glance and perhaps in search we’ll find romance. Two souls in bond of reckless join as one does stir within the loin. A night of share in bliss and sleep. Soft light to dare, one night to keep. My thoughts are there upon the dare of what might be, so please, to care enough of me to let me leap to all I strive, and still, these vows to keep I shall, I will in vows to you, refrain from leash or lash anew. I shall, I will my love, my dear, quell my words and calm thy fear |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I shall, I will in vows to you, refrain from leash or lash anew. I shall, I will my love, my dear, quell my words and calm thy fear. *sigh* Sometimes I've no words. This is one of those times. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Beautiful, Magnus! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Barry - this is excellent - thanks for inviting me to this wonderful conversation so well presented! Paul |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I must give credit to a most talented "MUSE" who assisted me with this writing... White Rose...thank you for your loss of words... which says a lot... Krishankins...thank you very much. Paul...you are most welcome...thank you... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Barry, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I think you should be awarded with the Poetic Mastery of Muse! (big hugggsssss) Your devotion to your muse is among the most deepest and golden than any other friend I've known, sweet friend, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interesting write, Magnus...so carefully are the two thoughts of individuals weaving together in the hopes of being one, but still... individually attaining... well done, Sir...kudos to you and your muse... |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Maybe my muse will hang around longer if I sweet talk her.It's woth a try. paladin |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - super write with your muse's helping. Great read... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry, you and your muse du-et so well together. YOU know I love this don't ya? ~Hugs to you and your muse~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Barry, this sounds like a renewal of marriage vows, kind of. It's beautiful. I hope understood by your muse. Sandra |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry and muse This was beautiful and full of honest feeling...together, the words are right to write. Very much enjoyed by me...thank yous! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I enjoyed this intertwine of thought..feelings and respect. Very well done. Sincerely, Reg |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Magnus, this was a very touching conversation and I am in awe of the way it is written. Great job. '...A heart devoted to love for life through moments hard, in times of strife...' These words really hit me in my heart. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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