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N orth Carolina Girl
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0 posted 2002-07-30 12:46 PM




These two had been friends for so long.
When one needed the other they were always strong.

They had been friends for over six years.
Never once did they hurt each other and bring tears.

Joe was the tallest of the two.
Playing ball was what Moe liked to do.

Joe was kind of quiet and shy.
Moe was always rowdy and spry.

Joe would get sick and Moe stayed my his side.
But then one day Moe just died.

Joe asked his mom what am I going to do?
I miss Moe and I love him too.

She looked at her son with tears in his eyes.
Moe has gone to heaven but in your heart he`ll never die.

Moe did what he knew was right.
He saved you from getting hit by the car that night.

Moe was your dog and you loved him so.
But there is one thing about Moe you should know.

Moe had been courting sometimes while you were gone.
There will a little Moe to play with before long.


Juanita
"Live,Love and Laugh"

© Copyright 2002 Juanita - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-07-30 12:50 PM


N orth Carolina Girl
Cute, enjoyed the read.

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2 posted 2002-07-30 12:51 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Juanita, this had me flooding in tears, I just read before this another beautiful heartfelt poem by Elizabeth Santos titled "Prayers" in the Spiritual Journies Foru here, I encourage youn to go read that, it is about the same kind of emotion. (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) I know how it must feel to lose something at such a young age and while I join them all in their tears, I also know with all my heart that their pets and loved ones will always love them and guide them with their love! (sigh) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a bautiful heart, sweet Juanita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

N orth Carolina Girl
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3 posted 2002-07-30 01:07 PM


Thanks so much Seymour!

Juanita
"Live,Love and Laugh"

N orth Carolina Girl
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4 posted 2002-07-30 01:08 PM


Noah,
As usual your sweet replies give me a smile.

Juanita
"Live,Love and Laugh"

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-07-30 01:32 PM


This is so cute, Juanita...


I am so glad to see you posting here again.
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

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Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-07-30 01:37 PM


Very cute write Juanita.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

N orth Carolina Girl
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7 posted 2002-07-30 02:27 PM


Lyra,

I hope you`re doing good.Tell David I said hey.TAKE CARE!

Juanita
"Live,Love and Laugh"

N orth Carolina Girl
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8 posted 2002-07-30 02:27 PM


Nancy,

Thanks for reading!

Juanita
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