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cherrypoptart
Member

since 2002-06-09

Posts 109
state of wordthiness

0 posted 2002-07-30 05:46 AM

If I'm in love with only you,
And no one else will do,
Could this distance end,
Cause you've been with me before,
And I know that nothing more,
Will give me life again.

If I have love for only you,
Will you take my heart.
If I have words for only you,
Will you hear my thoughts.
Or will you be unkind,
And drive me from your mind,
So I'll never love again.

If I promise not to do,
Anything untrue to you,
Could you please take my hand,
Cause I've been needing your support,
And I know my last resort,
Is to bring you back again.

Or will you think it strange,
And dash my hopes to vain,
So I'll never love again.

My father had a daughter and everyone was suprised!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-07-30 05:50 AM

Well since we're complimenting one another then I have to say this is very musical...I really like the economy of the words! Well done kid!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-07-30 09:02 AM

good rhythm and style.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-07-30 03:01 PM

Said if I only could ...
-KB

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-07-30 03:03 PM

Cold hands means a warm heart

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

5 posted 2002-07-30 03:06 PM

I agree with ethome, in that it is very musical, I love it

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

6 posted 2002-07-31 02:05 PM

A nice rhythm here, to complement the lovely words, Cherry.

~ hugs of rhythm

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-07-31 10:31 PM

(smiles) I am sure with a heart like yours he will never find it silly and gladly shorten the distance for you and invite you with a true love! (big hugggssssss) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rebecca, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-31-2002 10:31 PM).]

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2002-08-02 05:28 AM

BOING!

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