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Frozen In My Stance
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Frozen In My Stance |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sheer magnitude Of energy Felt from afar Frozen in my stance Unable to depart Electrifying beauty Thunderous in its steps I felt a light With in it's core Ever closer As it crept So close now was this cell My hair was blowing From my face No more thoughts Of running I had given up The chase Bolt of beauty Then struck through me Electric up my spine Then down again Tornado whirlwind Spun around me causing my thoughts To spin and spin The storm did pass Weather changed As weather seems to do But next I see The clouds roll In I'll be waiting here for you [This message has been edited by Zinsser (07-30-2002 03:02 AM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love tragic paralell in this.... Wonderful metaphors throughout......good writing! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Loved this Connie, nice writing  M |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Thank You both very much.... it was fun to write... : ) ~~ Connie ~~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Awww, that was cool! Said if I only could ... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Connie, this is such a haunting passionate poem, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I too wish for this special gift to always touch your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-30-2002 05:58 PM).] |
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