Open Poetry #21 |
Pastel Pause |
Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful...and what a vivid imagination, and creativity you have! I love this, every line of it! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sam, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, your words always hold such a meaning to them, such as a metamorphosis from sorrow to something new or a slow reincarnation to that level! (kiss on cheek) I am so happy you're here, sweet sister butterfly, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Samantha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh! I shall soak in the Jasmine that grapples my pane an aroma, inducing, a ridding of shame, yet while the dawn kisses tenderly, my thoughts to the day he will fade on Golden pastures, my outline in grey; His eyes, penetrating mistreated membranes, imprinting my substance and through earths powder, I shall collapse, without much resistance. I will link my imaginings and tie him to elation composing oaths of deep-seated love, for my soul is his creation; I awoke on disguised pledges, and I drove them all about an anthology of scar tissue, tossed and hurled out- My Poet sings unmoving, to a hushed, but hungry sphere And my colours fall fading, a pastel pause tear. =========================== This is most impressive & stunning writing... creative, unique and lovely. Your mastery of vocabulary, cadence and imagery is apparent...this was a pleasure to read aloud... your style in this one reminded me some of one of my faves, Rudy Kipling Welcome to Poetry Land Samantha... so nice to meet you. I will have to keep an eye out for your wonderful work. jm How she loves me, I dont understand |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Smooth, Sammie. This place (open) is like a high speed escalator. It's all I can do to keep up with my favorite peeps. Forgive if I miss you, occasionaly. Back to the top, w'ya! ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Samantha~ This is exquisitely lovely~ Welcome to Passions ... I will enjoy reading your breathtaking poetry~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely astounding writing Samantha! I love this! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
very nice and such a powerful last line! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
such a powerful poem - so well presented - your writing evokes lots of images and feelings - loved you poem - I will look for more - welcome to Passions - Paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Samantha, I'll have to go along with JM. You have become one of my favorites. |
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