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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-07-30 02:02 AM

No matter the distance
our hands always seem to settle in the middle
perched on a bridge of understanding and tolerance.
Do the secrets of our past really matter
in light of what it is now that tends to glow
every time we dream together?
I know you
have witnessed the nature of your heart
in words
in breath
and in the slight whisper of your eyes
as they watch me when you think I'm not looking.
Can I be captivated so by a man
that my wits would take a vacation somewhere sunny
for the rest of my life?
Can my eyes become so entangled with the dark of your lashes
that I forget my fear of drowning in another love story?
Through one glance I know your faults.
Through one kiss I know your desire.
When you held me
we talked beneath the rain that seemed to follow us everywhere.
We drank each other while huddled under a dawn sky
two nude wills
heart bathing beneath the light that each created.
We will love through chaos
be steadfast through all matters of storms.
two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion
a work of art that will surpass even the waves of hell
that think our devotion is made of sand.
Love endures
endurance rewards
and I will aspire to love you in the future
with as much faith as I do now.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

[This message has been edited by Temptress (07-30-2002 02:05 AM).]

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

1 posted 2002-07-30 02:40 AM

beautiful perfection......

Connie

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-07-30 09:21 AM

as they say, this is a keeper..you have expressed so beautifully how I often feel but can't seem to create the words....
hugs
M

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-07-30 11:39 AM

The bunnies, snakes and cypress liked this! And so did I.

Said if I only could ...
-KB

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-07-30 11:56 AM

Temptress
Very romantic, enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-07-30 12:00 PM

This is SO beautiful...
A splendid outpouring of feelings...
wonderful...and a keeper!
~Hugs~

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

6 posted 2002-07-30 02:28 PM

Pure Pleasure!!!

Neeraja

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-07-30 02:29 PM

Gives me hope with my Liam.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

8 posted 2002-07-30 02:31 PM

I always had hope Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

9 posted 2002-07-30 02:36 PM

a beautiful read.... captivating truly.

Parker

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2002-07-30 04:19 PM

now this is what I call great writing. . . flowing just totally from the heart and the soul. . .

great work. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-07-30 05:53 PM

"Love endures
endurance rewards
and I will aspire to love you in the future
with as much faith as I do now."

(big hugggssssss) Oh Jenn, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and I know with all my heart things will begin to look up, and I mean heavenly up for you very soon as loves faith embraces you! (kiss on cheek) We're all rooting for you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

12 posted 2002-07-30 08:04 PM

Ah, my friend, spoken beautifully...'love endures, endurance rewards...' What a beautiful phrase!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

13 posted 2002-09-10 09:24 AM

"Through all matters of storms."

Love should be like that, for everyone.

Thank you. It's good to read such words of love. I need them today.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

14 posted 2002-10-17 03:49 PM

quote:

Can my eyes become so entangled with the dark of your lashes
that I forget my fear of drowning in another love story?

It's all there.

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