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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-07-30 01:09 AM

I Look For Me

To be
so much in love
Then to find out
it is all gone
Could it be
there never was
Any love
in the first place
there at all

My love
could not have been
Any stronger
than it was
A forgiving person
is who I always was
Now it seems so hard
for me to even do

I use to know
who I was
What I felt
and what I thought
Forgiveness was
apart of me
Now it seems
I have forgot

I look for me
the me that use to be
So forgiving
and so caring
There was no end
to the love
I use to carry
inside of me

7-29-02

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

1 posted 2002-07-30 01:17 AM

This really got the tears rolling down my cheek, Sue...
Remember, though...its never too late to start over and it takes a lot of strength to face the truth sometimes...
and you are a strong woman.

~ hugs for strength

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2002-07-30 03:07 AM

keep it simple ... and when you like something write it down... it may be different then it was befor for we all grow from our life road......
Blessings
Connie

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-07-30 10:16 PM

SweetSuzieQ~
I look AT you and see a lovely, gentle, kind and caring friend~

A really thoughtful write sweetie~
Sending HUGS~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-07-30 10:17 PM

Very good expressive poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-07-30 11:07 PM

SmartChick - sad write, but I've found it helps to write it out. The best to you...

BC

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2002-07-30 11:31 PM

Hello Sue:
Beautiful flow in this one...the river that will carry you to the sea. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-07-30 11:39 PM

Hi Sue!
It all has a way of working out in the end.
Keep writing it out and you will feel better.
~Hugs~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2002-07-31 12:47 PM

This is so sad... When you know, without question, that the person you used to be no longer exists... and you don't yet know the person you've become, you're lost inside... and it's painful and frightening.

The person we see when we look at you is a treasure. Don't ever forget that. *S*

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-07-31 09:26 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Sue, my thoughts are with you, sweet friend, you are a very loving person and never let anyone else make you think otherwise! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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