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If There Were No Broken Hearts
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If There Were No Broken Hearts |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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What would we do If there were never broken hearts and true love came with first sight with no sadness or heartache If marriage were until death do us part as our vows said If there were no mistresses for men and men for the mistress No hanky for the panky No internet affairs If a man saw no yearning and never a head turning If a heart never skipped or a tongue never slipped If first love were the one in this race once begun And lust never once strayed as those hips slowly swayed If erotic art was not and the spa wasn’t hot Could the heart stay as true as when we said I do I think I would be bored and wish to just be gored cause I simply do adore watchin’ hips sway...for shore Besides....my poetry would sure get boring.....need to put a little chili seasoning in it every once in a while.....!!!! [This message has been edited by Magnus (06-14-2002 09:37 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Lots of hot spice in this one, Barry... I like to read your different styles, and this one is cute and saucy... I like it a lot.  ~ spicy hugsLyra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
AAAAreeeba! Great Write! ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You won't get any disagreement from this wench Barry! Good Stuff! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Lyra... The pen sometimes flows in directions even I am not to sure of...This was one of those writes....My muse went on vacation...and I am struggling...(at least that is what I feel) Kathy....Wait a minute....I didn't know a lady from Connecticut would be speaking Espanol.... You forgot to add "Andale, andale!!!" Nancy...Nay Wench...Doth thee not know that thy art still in eyes of this knight? Besides...the White Shoulders lingers a very very long time...(grin)!!!! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Truer words seldom spoken. It's not often that people think of broken hearts that way. Thanks for the reality check  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
For shore...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'm with ya when it comes to the hips swaying, among other things.......Good questions and a answer that confirms our inherited imperfection.......Put the tobasco right to it, I'll read it! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Magnus, some like it hot I see, well spicy works for you. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, You little devil you. LOL Enjoyed the read. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...Your poetry is NEVER boring; always brim full of passion and exotic dreams of love. Enjoyed this poem immensely...just full of gems of truth and beauty. ***Ivy Rose |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
If there were no broken hearts..I would not be a poet. I like this, you always write something interesting, this has some good questions, doesn't it? Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ LOL ! Attsa somea spicy Magnus stuff~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry Love the reverse spin on ever after! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
The trick is to keep it spicey with out the broken hearts... : ) ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Truly the spice of life in verse. Yin and Yang etc. I really liked it! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy I think this is utterly utterly perfection in your marvellous and utterly unique way. Truly perfect writing, and I love it. What would you do without hips’ sway If wench’s fire didn’t fuel minds play If the taste of flames didn’t haunt you Tell me friend what would you do? What if the heat didn’t spark and flow Would you be happy to let it go? If there was no hint of my heated touch Would you miss the feel of such? What would you do if fire were cool? Would you miss diving in the pool? To feel the fire lapping your skin Would you still desire to go within If there were no sparks between us two Would you miss the heat, as I would do? Would you want to call the fire again? To hear it calling out your name If there were no heat then I’d miss this The taste of fire the heat of bliss If no thoughts of passion no taste of me Then I’d not be inflamed by this poetry Marsha I love it truly you are a master at these poems darling boy, and I love it utterly utterly love it. This flows so wonderfully it flows like a clear stream of liquid light. How can you say your muse has deserted you? this is wonderful and I love it utterly utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where's the crackers, lime and ... salt? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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