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Mirage
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Mirage |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Clouded cries bank my sky- in wicked rays of crimson shade- siren songs. can you hear them? Dust unsettled through the night- blurring ration from my sight- fantasy. can you see it? Brazen caress marks my chest- and grace is but a foretaste- silence. can you feel it? Whisper tips of finger lips- suckle sweet smiles from my denial – seduction. can you taste it? Filtering my senses I breathe in shallow glimpses Catch a dose of hope through bright kaleidoscope Only to find the sun a mockery begun For I am waterless upon mirage abreast. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
devina, there ya' go. You've taken me on another journey with ya'. Enjoyed the scenery as well as the ride. ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
 Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nothing like bringing out all of the senses as you have done so well.....You bet I can>> |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Tanya, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever so well where I wonder if someone else felt the same way I do and truly I felt the beauty of this vision! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I hear, I see, I feel... great work! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
wandrin' in this desert make me THIRSTY raisin my can to this vividness BS I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've always wondered just where the oasis was. . . love it. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
when you do what you do, you do it so well! I love this one, T!!  A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a mirage of excellence, Devina... I enjoyed cooling off from the hot sun, here in your personal written oasis, Devina.  ~ cooling hugsLyra |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
Dust unsettled through the night- blurring ration from my sight- fantasy. can you see it? i think so |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
devina - I can feel them all with this terrific write... BC |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
i was reading this and just before i became entranced, The Ataris came on with the song "San Dimas High School Football rules" and the first verse was a perfect backdrop for this poem about this mirage.... love it when the world comes together like that. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is wonderful Sandra |
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