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Watching the rain (The Taste of Silence Challenge)
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Watching the rain (The Taste of Silence Challenge) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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it had been a nice sunny day But then the rain came in The thought of hearing the rain Made me happy Yet at the same time sad The rain slowly started to fall I starred out my window As it fell I thought of all the happy And yet sappy times I had in the rain How when I thought of my love I kept sane Then I thought of the night My love left me behind Crying in the middle of a rain storm How life was a bore without him So when the rain comes I just sit back and watch it fall And think about all the good And bad times I had But mostly the good Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Gotta love such poetry. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Very heartfelt. Thanks for doin' the challenge, tl23. She said burn ... together. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this sounds like a wonderful challenge, I love it, may the rain always fall on you in joy with loves sweetness, dearest friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
heartfelt poetry - thanks for the read - Paul |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Wonderfully written... mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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