Watching the rain (The Taste of Silence Challenge)

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Open Poetry #21

Watching the rain (The Taste of Silence Challenge)

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-29 05:00 PM

it had been a nice sunny day
But then the rain came in
The thought of hearing the rain
Made me happy
Yet at the same time sad

The rain slowly started to fall
I starred out my window
As it fell

I thought of all the happy
And yet sappy times I had in the rain
How when I thought of my love
I kept sane

Then I thought of the night
My love left me behind
Crying in the middle of a rain storm
How life was a bore without him

So when the rain comes
I just sit back and watch it fall
And think about all the good
And bad times I had
But mostly the good

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

1 posted 2002-07-29 05:28 PM

Gotta love such poetry.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-07-29 06:03 PM

Very heartfelt. Thanks for doin' the challenge, tl23.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-07-29 08:15 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this sounds like a wonderful challenge, I love it, may the rain always fall on you in joy with loves sweetness, dearest friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2002-07-29 08:23 PM

heartfelt poetry - thanks for the read - Paul

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

5 posted 2002-07-29 09:53 PM

Wonderfully written...

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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