»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #21
»
Read My Heart Like A Closed Book
| Open Poetry #21 |
|
Read My Heart Like A Closed Book |
|
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Read My Heart Like A Closed Book By: Noah Eaton 7/28/02 Read my heart like a closed book Don't peek and look Just lay back and we'll write this story together We'll let it flow like a babbling brook It is fun to see where this will go... It would be no fun looking ahead And skimming the pages So let me faithfully and honestly love you with enchantment... Hand in hand we'll turn the page Chapter 1, how we felt love at first gaze Chapter 2 we'll encounter loves obstacles But in Chapter 3 our love only accelerates That's when I found out we're meant to be... We write the book... Upon this fine authentic vellum Quills my sacred blood and vermouth Your destiny child's balladeer The magician to all of your truths Your chefd'oeuvre's au jus When our first book is poetically full Together we'll write the sequel Building viaducts to each others needs Being your white beach with seagulls I will do for you all you please Your lifes king is at your feet... Read my heart like a closed book I'll write I Love You on every page Just sit back and enjoy the ride I want to suprise you with loves sweet sage Upon this magic carpet ride I want to suprise you Share all my deepest secrets I want every day to be Christmas Just for you Once upon a time We'll live happily ever after.. ...fin "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...and they lived happily ever after. Oh if it were just that way Noah! Hey, I just got back in and your is the first poem I've read and signed! Nice to be back and reading you 'sidekick'! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
||
|
devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
What can I say here Noah? this is perfect!!! we NEED to see more happily ever afters round here...and I love this!!! take care sweetie!! ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
||
|
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. By the way I will do True Poets 3 sometime within the next few days. I really enjoyed this one Noah! Cold hands means a warm heart |
||
|
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - you're a great writer, and I enjoy reading your works... BC |
||
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, Noah, again this is overwhelmingly beautiful. You use unusual words within the poem that brings it out even more favorably. I don't know how you do it! Sandra |
||
|
ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
few can equal your ability to express love so tenderly so true your love sounds to other like the peel of a bell across water this is one of those times, Noah, buddy, that i am in awe of you, and envious of your devotion. Jeff |
||
|
mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Noah dear, I wonder if you knew this is truly a captivating piece. Very beautiful and it sure came out of a romantic heart!  marie Keep counting your blessings |
||
|
Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
***bump***  SS[This message has been edited by Singing Sparrow (08-04-2002 08:30 PM).] |
||
|
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
'...love you with enchantment...' Oh, Noah, this is so very beautiful, and from a heart like yours, I would expect no less...thank you for this gem! Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
||
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Noah, this is as beautiful as your heart is. Hugs. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
||
|
secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
U know I dont know what to say about ur soft words..they all told their opinion ...and all i can say that I really love it ...I feel it....just thanx for sharing with us ur perfect writting...looking to read more from u,,,, Huges,, Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
||
|
Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
"Read my heart like a closed book" Impressive poem Noah... and I love the above line... Neeraja |
||
|
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
VERY beautiful work, Noah!!!! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
||
|
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A heartfelt write, Noah, you know that I'm a hopeless romantic and of course I believe in happy endings, too bad though that they don't happen all the time though. This is one of your best and I'm saving it Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
||
|
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Your heart, my friend, could never be a closed book. I loved it, Noah! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
||
|
Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
Noah, I truly enjoyed reading this. I particularly enjoyed the mixture of uncommon words and phrases that you used like a Master Chef creating a new delicacy for our enjoyment. My compliments to the chef..... I look forward to more of your work, with great anticipation..... like waiting for dessert.... thanks, Jason Practiced in the Art of Perception |
||
|
Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Noah, your writing is always so honest and feeling. I believe I'm going to keep this one. Keep sending us more. |
||
|
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
