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A Shaft of Light
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A Shaft of Light |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Shaft of Light I rode a shaft of light to sea A road of clouds to fantasy Through lifts imaginations view Drifted with the winds that blew And there I found a make believe Beyond my wildest minds conceive With azure brooks of choral sighs And flowers holding butterflies Pure magic in a humidor A transience of overawe Of silver shards of moons good night Bright angels playing in the light I palmed hands in sonnets prayer To keep the vision always there Within the clouds of fantasy To always fly my mind to sea And to this day each time I wile I always find a Christmas Isle. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Sy...for the  ... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I just love this - thank you, thank you. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you my beautiful sunshine.  Marti, A dear sweet reply, thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And there I found a make believe Beyond my wildest minds conceive With azure brooks of choral sighs And flowers holding butterflies Pure magic in a humidor A transience of overawe Of silver shards of moons good night Bright angels playing in the light I palmed hands in sonnets prayer To keep the vision always there Within the clouds of fantasy To always fly my mind to sea And to this day each time I wile I always find a Christmas Isle. ==================================== Could the imagery in this be any cooler???? With azure brooks of choral sighs And flowers holding butterflies Of silver shards of moons good night Bright angels playing in the light Stunning images... "silver shards of moons good night"(yer so kewl)  and could these lines be any cooler.. Pure magic in a humidor A transience of overawe I palmed hands in sonnets prayer To keep the vision always there I do so love your poetic mind... and you just put a whole new spin on "Christmas in July" with this gem of pen. Beautiful write Stinkylove... So..does Randy pull the sleigh?    |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart ahhhhh I never know if I’m going to get back in the door when I leave if I’m going to get back in. When I eventually do I’m so happy, that I get the chance to float in dreams and golden schemes where dragons play at the break of day and where Seymour calls come with me to the land of dreams over the sea. As always darling heart superb writing from a master artist, I love it utterly, but of course you know that Keep a place for me darling man there on the isle of dreamers smile  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire Thy coolness and they balm Let sense be dumb let flesh retire Speak through the earthquake wind and fire [This message has been edited by Marsha (07-29-2002 11:13 AM).] |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
And there I found a make believe Beyond my wildest minds conceive With azure brooks of choral sighs And flowers holding butterflies i wanted to stand and applaud you! this expells such positivity! adorable piece, absolutely beautifully expressed.....ahhhhhhhh poetic perfection in meter and word use...the imagery is stunning you have totally grabbed my attention on this work of art!! a true timeless sharing~ a rare gem! Sammie ^i^ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, My tinkerbell flies high this morning. Perhaps to visit my christmas in july wile. Shall we open the presents on the white sands of infinite or perhaps after tea. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. Marsha, You are always welcome in my dreams and even a few wiles. LOL |
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likitysplit Junior Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 23Alabama |
THIS IS REALLY A GREAT PIECE OF POETRY MR. TABIN. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Samantha, You slipped in while I was answering others and I can only humbly thank you for the lovely reply. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
likitysplit, This is no likitysplit comment and I thank you for it. |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
Beautifully penned my friend. Well done |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lisann Thank you for the beautiful. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - I found this a very peaceful read this morning. You write well my friend... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, That was the idea, thank you for the read and reply. |
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andEmmamakes3 Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 66Kent |
Seymour hi there your writing is always so special and beautifully written. You manage to encapsulate so much life and delight into it thank you. This is excellent I love it Emma  Eternity, stands laughing at old time |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, I just love this, sweet friend, this is wonderful, I just love that sonnet prayer you bade here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I palmed hands in sonnets prayer To keep the vision always there Within the clouds of fantasy To always fly my mind to sea Very beautiful writing, here...Sy... I love clouds of fantasy.... To me, they often look like mashed potatoes, I guess thats because I think about food a lot.  ~ hugs and beautiful cloudsLyra |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I palmed hands in sonnets prayer To keep the vision always there I'll join you in that prayer if you promise to keep sharing the vision with us. *S* This is lovely, Seymour... soothing excellence. *S* |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Within the clouds of fantasy to always fly my mind to sea... How I love this poem!!!  Neeraja |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I was floatin right along side you Sy... love this mental pic of beauty!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Emma, Thank you sweet. Noah, Thank you friend. Lyra, Mashed potatoes sounds good. Suthern, I promise. Neeaja, Glad you liked it, thank you. Devina, I thought I felt someone else there. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Your poetry is marvelous! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy... You poet sir... have penned another  !!~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Thank you dear. Enchantress, You are a love. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Merry Christmas, Sy... because I know you're looking over all of us...  |
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