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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-06-14 07:04 PM

I walk
the trodden hallowed path
as destiny lies at my feet

Bare soul cast to the winds
from a shuddering heart’s beat

Why must a soul depart and walk alone
into the wilderness
of forgotten dreams
where time
has whisked days into seconds
and seconds
into a lifetime of memories

As my soul walks
life passes on

That spark of energy given
upon the first beat of countless beats
as the first neuron fires within a brain
where memories lie resting
stirring occasionally

Love
has altered the beat of my heart
bringing forth staccatos, tremors
and moments when a beat ceases
as the death of love comes
to a dying, yet beating heart.
(Something different, flexing my wings)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-06-14 07:13 PM

I like this Barry, but the death of love? We don't want that, you are the romantic poet, remember

Sandra

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-06-14 07:18 PM

Sandra,

Fret not my lady
For the pen of love shall be
mighty as the sword
springing ever free...

Thanx Sandra...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-06-14 07:43 PM

Magnus,
Good write, enjoyed the read.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2002-06-14 08:01 PM

Magnus darling boy this is utterly amazingly well written, you know for certain that I absolutely adore this you do free verse so well, as well as you do every other type. I love this utterly utterly, it drips into my soul feeding me like sweet ambrosia, you are indeed the King of Romance.

Perfect poetical writing from an absolutely brilliant perfect poetical poet’s pen. This is awesome and you know I love it Utterly utterly utterly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2002-06-14 08:11 PM

Another masterpiece, Barry...

enjoyed!

~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-06-14 08:39 PM

Barry, this is a bit of a change for you...
Albeit...probably your BEST!!

Once again....Happy Birthday!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2002-06-14 09:51 PM

I like it! The form took me right down the page like a waterfall. Nice. ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-06-18 11:00 PM

BRAVO!!! This is indeed against your grain of your usual style, but like always, your golden quill continues to astonish me! (big hugggsssssss) May your heart always beat on with true love to crow about, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2002-06-19 12:34 PM

Hello Barry

I love this one. Your talent has no boundaries.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-06-19 01:05 AM

awwwwww no stop of heart......

romance, LOL feed me...

Lauren~

Its been a long road
Getting from there to here
Ive known a wind so cold, seen the darkest days
but now the winds I feel are only winds of change

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

11 posted 2002-06-19 01:43 AM

I knew I was going to love this poem by looking at the title. And more so now after reading its content.

touching...

mycafe

the most awesome about friendship is to find a simple mutuality of comfort...in each other

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

12 posted 2002-06-19 04:26 AM

Barry
These words and lines are flowing out of you in a poetic stream.
This is superb!

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