Open Poetry #21 |
Heartfelt |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The beat taken for granted constant perpetual unaware of you The pain recklessly skipping falling behind absorbing you The rush warmed by flow forward overwhelming closing in on you The love eternal powered endlessly and only for you create an addiction .... share a smile!! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
That is sweet. I feel the emotion. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Strong feelings, Craig. Well expressed. Sandra |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sandra - this was a piece I had started sometime ago ... thanks to your mornings tribute, I was able to find the missing words ... ... thank you. This is only one day .... tomorrow is only one more. I truly hope you feel and share the wave of emotions shared here on these pages of blue ... the connection is you. Loner - thank you ... sweet of you to reply. [This message has been edited by ctowen (06-10-2002 09:22 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow! Very strong feelings and emotions penned here Craig! Love this...into my library it goes! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Is it truely possible for one human to show soo much passion and intensity just from a few words? Well, you have managed to to that. This is a wonderful piece that I will, if you don't mind have to share with others. Thank you for the read. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Craig~ Always heartfelt when coming from you....lovely, tender words.....I am keeping this... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Craig, you pen the perfect definition and epitome of "heartfelt" that should be gazed upon every dictionaey reader, sweet friend, I LOVE THIS, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
This is melodic! Great writing! ~Sydney McLean |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Craig You write of love and romance so effortlessly and it is always a pleasure to read your outstanding words. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is so easy to read and feel Nice tender words! |
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