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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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0 posted 2002-07-28 03:45 PM



It’s dangerous to fall in love
with poetry,
entangled in so many lines,
shackled to a chair,
as if held by cement blocks.
My fingers twisting my hair
I'm unable to move my body,
captivated by smooth words,
and stirring imagery,
the night slips away,
and once again,
I’ve been seduced

BloomingRose


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Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
1 posted 2002-07-28 06:10 PM


I know this feeling well, Deb...
and you have expressed it so very beautifully.
~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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2 posted 2002-07-28 07:45 PM




(smiles) Oh Debra, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, sometimes I get up very early in the morning or in the middle at night just so I can captivate the dreams I have and while it is dangerous, I love the ride! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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