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Open Poetry #21

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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2002-07-28 03:21 AM

nick you-
     drawing blood
you hack back
     with broadword
smashing my shield
denting breastache

I feint
     thrust
slip through the glib

you drop the sworn
and mad-end
pick up the ex
and demolish
splinter
everyme in site

Irie treat meself
and go lapse
on the couch

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2002-07-29 12:57 PM

Brian,
Found this little gem about 3 cars back on the bullet train (Club Car?)

Like your askew here

Pfssst! Ahhh!

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.

Bukowski

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

2 posted 2002-07-29 12:58 PM

deft wordplay o yuh!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-07-29 01:48 PM

egtf

She said burn ... together.
-TON

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

4 posted 2002-07-29 04:19 PM

Your jaunty word structure here gives me the impression that you were actually *smiling* through this?!

no need to deny...grins...

enjoyed this silent bri
~this little D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

5 posted 2002-07-30 01:12 AM

thanks everybody
yeah, fights are fun
love em....
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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