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brian sites
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0 posted 2002-07-28 03:21 AM


nick you-
     drawing blood
you hack back
     with broadword
smashing my shield
denting breastache

I feint
     thrust
slip through the glib

you drop the sworn
and mad-end
pick up the ex
and demolish
splinter
everyme in site

Irie treat meself
and go lapse
on the couch

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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wranx
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1 posted 2002-07-29 12:57 PM


Brian,
Found this little gem about 3 cars back on the bullet train (Club Car?)

Like your askew here


Pfssst! Ahhh!

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2002-07-29 12:58 PM


deft wordplay o yuh!
bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-07-29 01:48 PM




egtf

She said burn ... together.
-TON

devina
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4 posted 2002-07-29 04:19 PM


Your jaunty word structure here gives me the impression that you were actually *smiling* through this?!

no need to deny...grins...

enjoyed this silent bri
~this little D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
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5 posted 2002-07-30 01:12 AM


thanks everybody
yeah, fights are fun
love em....
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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