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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Childhood childhood is fleeting barely coming into focus before it ends attempts to grasp it, to hold its moments, its flashing images in our minds in our hearts are futile it is that which Polaroids cannot begin to comprehend ©July 27, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Much truth here Virginia... I have often wondered what goes through a newborn baby's mind when first born and the fear of waking from the sleep prior to birth into a stark world of humanity.... Imagine the fear....not even knowing a single word to express... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well expressed, Virginia, this is your finest, I really enjoy this side of your writing~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Full of truth.Very nice! |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
this is clearly stated, and reads just so powerful, especially your last lines~ final stanza tied this up beautifully to leave an echo on your words i think this is awesome! Sammie ^i^ |
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