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Stormy Skies
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Stormy Skies |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Stormy skies nestled upon a darkening horizon. Smell of weather in the air. Squinting against an invisible gust of nature’s breath as trees sway in reverence. Pasture grasses flowing like the ocean swells in endless waves of green and brown hues on an earthen bed. Flashes of His energy silhouetting as beast and fowl scurry for shelter. Change comes on wings of light as thunder rolls endlessly and man prays for rain..... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wow! A little laundry there yourself sire! Excellent activity and wonderful description. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, I have been praying for rain so much here lately because we are in a huge drought and I love the rain! (sigh) This is electrifying, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
 to say that this is good would be an understatement. A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Lovely imagery.Nice write! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Ohhh how I wish for rain....this has a mystery to it, nice words.... hugsssssLauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Have some of our rain we get so much weve almost been flooded twice this summer. If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Please...send some my way... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Flashes of His energy silhouetting as beast and fowl scurry for shelter. Change comes on wings of light as thunder rolls endlessly and man prays for rain..... A beautiful write, Barry... It reminds me of last night. It thundered and "lightninged" all night long, but it only rained for about 10 minutes.  ~ thunderous hugsLyra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy YOU have to know this is exquisite writing darling heart, it really is exceptional. I know when I see your name it is going to be something special but this is more than that. Utterly utterly perfect writing I love it. I’m trying to be brief, it’s not necessarily working but I am trying, and quite in the back who called out yes you are very So sisnce I’m attempting brevity this is simply wonderful I love it utterly utterly utterly love it As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry You write the edge of storm so well...really enjoyed. If you have any left, send it to California. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah yes! Pray hard! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Barry, great description of the forces of nature. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - nice write as always. I can send you a little rain, as it's doing it right now... BC |
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