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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“SEEING YOU” by Bill Charles ~~~~ While you were standing there on the walking bridge your mirror image reflected on the surface of the pond… It was caressed by reflections of the sky, the clouds, and trees flowing with the soft breeze, as you stood there… I could only stare, and seeing you like this inspired me to write a poem about, and only for you… I wanted to write and describe your beauty which I see with my eyes, and how your being rhymes with your spirit… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Bill, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, I know just how you feel because I always want to show Joanna exactly how mch she means to me and I always write love poems for her to reveal it to her! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely penned Bill. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Bill! This is so sweet. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bill, Sounds like love to me.Very nice! Juanita |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
this sings softly ~ a great release of the minds eye....awesome Sammie ^i^ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I wanted to write and describe your beauty which I see with my eyes, and how your being rhymes with your spirit… I love the concept of beauty rhyming with spirit, Bill... an excellent write.  ~ hugs of rhyme and spiritLyra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What wonderful imagery here. Enjoyed. ThisDiamond |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Very pretty thoughts sir!! hope you shared it with the intended?? Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hey BC. . . it's amazing what seeing will inspire. . .eh, my friend??? wonderfully done. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
and how your being rhymes with your spirit… lovely, lovely! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is beautiful...just beautiful...helen |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very, very beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
BC....very light and extremely nicely done. |
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