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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
The sun that baked the sky to dry has found a way to say, “Good-bye.” It’s behind the clouds that covered fast, waiting for the sky to blast lightning and thunder herds of cumulus and stratus blurs. ******* The lawn awaits my fast attention to gather up the blades’ contention for rising tall, too tall for me to please the local ‘munity. Therefore, I must stop this revelry of writing of my reverie, and get myself and all my girth out atop the green-clad earth. ©June 14, 2002 Point of info: By the time I got out the mow the lawn, the clouds were almost tot'ly gone. So now it's hot and sunny, too, no cool for me, now, how 'bout you? It is about 10 degrees cooler than yesterday, though, I think. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. [This message has been edited by VAS (06-14-2002 04:45 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like your description. Very good write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi there VAS!!! Did you ever get your lawn mowed?? Loved this, as I like a nice yard, but would rather write about it then take care of business!!! LOL!!! Back to the front with this summertime write!!  Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
When I mow the lawn, first I look at it....weeds, length etc., and I ponder what kind of job is it gonna be this time....a "one six pack" task?...maybe a two?.....nice write VAS....liked it.... |
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