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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-07-15 08:33 PM



A Satisfied Mystery
~*~
I think I was delighted
when first I heard your voice
and twice as happy when at last
I finally saw your face
a mystery you were to me
except for words exchanged
on rapturous lines of yearning ink
a divine insanity
of thrilling need that has come to be
a euphoric reality
that satisfies my very soul
like honey from a bee
yet twice as sweet
so from this day forward
the mystery of you
is satisfied


BloomingRose

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1 posted 2002-07-15 08:35 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know this suprise so much and I am so happy your loves mystery has been revealed! (kiss on cheek) May love forever knead sweet honey to your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Morcastlin
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2 posted 2002-07-15 08:35 PM


What an awesome and beautifully written piece! Thank you!

Love,
Bonnie

"I want to Live! Life is a banquet and most poor bastards are starving to death!" -Auntie Mame

Goodknight
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3 posted 2002-07-15 08:44 PM


very nicely done - I liked your poem lots - very touching!! Paul
BloomingRose
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4 posted 2002-07-15 09:06 PM


Noah~ This is merely a poem of fantasy. There is no mystery man for me.
As always I Thank you for reading. *hugs*

Bonnie~ Thank you so much!

Paul~ So glad you enjoyed.

Mark Bohannan
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5 posted 2002-07-16 03:42 AM


No mystery to me ... your poetry is very satisfying as is your heart.  Beautifully said and one I think I will keep if I may.
BloomingRose
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6 posted 2002-07-16 07:32 AM


Mark~ Ahhhh the mystery of it all
Such fun.
Thank you


Lighthousebob
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7 posted 2002-07-16 10:58 AM


Deb,

What a fun poem.  Seems so true for the audible voices and faces of those here at "Passions" seem at large a mystery... How exciting might it be to actually meet someone from here one day.  Again, a fun poem to ponder.  -Bob

Decaflame
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8 posted 2002-07-16 11:02 AM



The connections are vast...so many here find relationships that were meant to be...so many good things happen....

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-07-16 12:53 PM


BloomingRose~
I just love this~

AND you need to get yourself to the Tampa area in September for meeting with some of PiP's poets !

Yes you can !!!
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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10 posted 2002-07-16 04:36 PM


yes. . . it's nice when mysteries can finally be solved. . .

great job. . .

------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

mycafe
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11 posted 2002-07-16 11:46 PM


Beautiful! BloomingRose.  Loved every line of it!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

BloomingRose
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12 posted 2002-07-17 08:15 AM


Bob~ Indeed!

Deca~ ditto

Marge~ I think we can all agree. I need to find out when and where this meeting in Tampa will be. Thanks!

Sven~ Thank you, so true!

mycafe~ Thank you

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