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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-07-27 11:09 AM



Seasons Sing


Talk to me in words
That seem to fall
From stars

Read to me
Of times past
That swirl
Into present

Braid the day
And night together
Blending heat
Of both orbs

Let the seasons
Sing to us
Ever promising more



© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-07-27 11:12 AM


Zinsser
Lovely write, enjoyed.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-27 02:14 PM




(smiles) Oh Connie, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may all the seaosns always sing cheer to your heart and bring you special memories, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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3 posted 2002-07-27 02:40 PM


this is a great poem - I really enjoyed reading it!! thanks Paul
Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-07-27 02:47 PM


Zinsser - Nice write...

BC

Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-07-27 04:48 PM


Braid the day
And night together
Blending heat
Of both orbs

Very special, Connie...
very beautifully expressed.
~ poetic chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

paladin
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6 posted 2002-07-27 06:52 PM


Beautiful poem.It flowed so smoothly as I read it.

paladin

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