Evening (an all "E" tanka)

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Open Poetry #21

Evening (an all "E" tanka)

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2002-08-03 11:39 PM

Every evening ends
Each ethereal eve
Eternal exits

paladin

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-08-03 11:43 PM

Wow!!! Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, this twisted my tongue and I love it, just looking up at the stars had me thinking of this serenity beauty, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-08-03 11:43 PM

Now, this, I liked alot

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.

Bukowski

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-08-03 11:50 PM

YOU are so very clever my friend!!
Very very well done!
~nite hugs~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2002-08-05 04:41 PM

now, how did you know that I was considering making an all "e" challenge to go with my no "e" challenge??

well done Sir. . . flows very well. . .

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EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

5 posted 2002-08-05 04:49 PM

you displayed some wonderful
Eternally emphatic ever- emanating emergence!!

this is your life. good to the last drop. doesn't get any better than this.
mwuuaafuuak

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