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Apocalyptic Love
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Apocalyptic Love |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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When apocalyptic love shadows tragedy conscious tears mirror planetary sorrows dying names breathes anguish and despair cursed is the plagued bliss. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-27-2002 10:24 PM).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Makes me think that you see the whole picture... well done, Sir... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
words of terra Martin...I like it!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan An arrow of long shaft, enjoyed. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Guess the title itself draws criticism...the depth in very few lines appeals to me too! thanks for sharing  |
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R. Dean Junior Member
since 2002-07-26
Posts 37Illinois--USA |
Spelling on "conscious" (typo?). The piece could use some additional punctuation, and in the penultimate line, I'm not sure if you mean "breathe" or "breath's" but either way, some clarification is in order. Yours in peace, |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Martin Very interesting read.I like it. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Lots to think about here, Martin... Very well written.  ~ hugs from an admiring chipmunkLyra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Anyone can speak their mind, but when you speak your heart, there is clarity. There is something that is so human to befall this predicament...and so I have always believed that love is a healing power. Best Regards, ThisDiamond |
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