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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-06-14 02:23 PM


A Short Story
of Love

When you
fall in love
and she doesn't
was love wasted
where love
wasn't?

JamesLee
June14
2002
Thoughts
fromTimes
Past


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ethome
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1 posted 2002-06-14 02:31 PM


Love expressed in any shape or form isn't wasted at the time.  Love is love and it's marvelous, never really wasted even if it's one sided. I'm sure there's someone up there that keeps track of love given out. Somewhere at the end of the rainbow!! Someday that someone will dump a heap of love right back on your heart and I hope you can handle it!........It's just when the one you love doesn't reciprocate then it seems so devastingly hollow......make any sense James.....Maybe I'm just crazy!
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2 posted 2002-06-14 04:05 PM


I am on the side that says NO, it is not wasted. Even though it feels like it sometimes. I will never be sorry for the men I have loved.
Sandra

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2002-06-14 04:10 PM


I say no it is not wasted either. I have loved 3 guys in my life and I don't regret it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sven
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4 posted 2002-06-14 04:22 PM


ah yes, another question for the ages my friend. . .

great work. . .

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Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-06-17 10:04 PM




(sigh) I wouldn't say it was ever wasted, I would just say it was not deserving and it is way out of proportion had the other not loved like the other person! (big hugggsssss) This is a very powerful question, sweet friend, you always discuss feelings so well, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (06-17-2002 10:04 PM).]

Goodknight
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6 posted 2002-06-17 10:22 PM


not very long on words but very long on pondering - thanks
Magnus
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7 posted 2002-06-17 10:35 PM


Sometimes, the one love most remembered is
the one that never was....Make sense?

Nice message James..

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2002-06-18 12:18 PM


Love is never wasted, James...
I think we learn from everyone we ever love, even if they don't love us back.

~ hugs for happiness in love

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2002-09-13 05:49 AM


Thank you all for the nice comments about this short story of love...James
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