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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-07-26 09:20 PM


“ENCHANTING FLAME”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I know that deep inside the forest,
lives an enthralling Indian Princess…
Her spirit magic, capturing lost souls,
as they were found in their bareness...

I met her once when I was misplaced,
a spirit missing from deep within…
Fires burned there not knowing why,
perhaps where I was suppose to begin…

Cradled me into her tender embrace,
felt the enchanting flame of caring…
Heard whispers of everlasting words,
stopped this soul from its bleeding…
~~~~


© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-07-26 09:26 PM


Time heals the soul and the scars show
that much has been learned...

Good write Bill..

Marsha
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2 posted 2002-07-26 09:40 PM


Bill darling boy this is exquisite writing and I love it utterly, your sojourn away from here has if anything increased the brilliance of your ability to write. You have encapsulated such a thought and wonderful picture here, absolutely excellent.

You know I love this one my dearest friend, this is YOU at your best I love it utterly


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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3 posted 2002-07-26 09:43 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the sacred and beautiful spiritual feel of this, sweet friend, I am mostly Cherokee Indian by ancestry so I am always happy to read enchanting tales like these! (big hugggssssss) I am so happy you are back, sweet friend, this is spellbindingly gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-07-26 09:43 PM


Bill...just beautiful...enjoyed so much tonight.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

SmartChick
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5 posted 2002-07-26 09:47 PM


This is just beautiful. Enjoyed very much.
Tea Lady
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6 posted 2002-07-26 09:54 PM


Pure magic.  You hold the tone throughout.  My compliments!
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