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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-07-26 04:11 PM




perdition colored sky wearing cannabis chaps
and bar closed eyes when the lustrous lights dance
on just another ganja gaged L.A. by morning

with the haze of the mind (too much smoke
one would suppose or hypothecate,
did that when they were straight
somewhere between 71' and 68')

when those streets of years
don't matter much, but were just a gap
of conspicuous disparity between the gears

all the roads were growing like tails on lizards
and this dependent sky covered my reasonings
with that glow of hemp rope hope
like the ember end of this wheat straw canary

I whisper wry throat scripts
to the hollow eyed physician's lips
and his brown bottle nurse that curses cures

old iron drags my mind under the stars
of hollywood's sidewalk mavens
where the under neath of their tin
is just dressed up brass to impress the kin

that walk the darker side of hell sky mornings

©Dark

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-07-26 09:46 PM


Dark Stranger
No matter the symbols the walk is the same with variations. Enjoyed

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-26 09:46 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I tried getting on this site earlier but it wasn't responding and may I be the first to say this is wonderful! I too know the dark sides of Hollywood so much and you show that passion so well here cryptically! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus
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3 posted 2002-07-26 09:49 PM


This could be Rod Serling talking about the
next episode of the Twilight Zone....

Nicely done Dark...

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2002-07-26 11:25 PM


grin...I almost typed "ah yes, I remember it well..." then I remembered that I actually don't remember much at all.

--ACTUAL CONVERSATION between serenity and her boyfriend, while watching one of those VH1 specials on Jefferson Airplane/Starship. Immediately after seeing the now sober Grace Slick saying she would never sing on stage again? I moaned:

"Now I will NEVER get to see her!"

The boyfriend answered:

"You HAVE seen her. THREE TIMES."

silence. pause.

"OH." I answered. "Did I have fun?"


--now back to yer poem. I remember though, the shock of sunlight when opening those doors that so effectively blocked the sun. I HATED when that happened. I call those stories, my "Vampire Chronicles".

Enjoyed.

(at least? that's the rumor! )

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2002-07-29 05:19 AM


sy ....thanks amigo
noah, thanks you my friend for your reads and replys
magnus, thanks so much for the read
serene...lol, went back to the old haunts and saw the grand kids of the kids I was stoned with...wow..  thanks for the read

rwood
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6 posted 2002-07-29 07:21 AM


This needs another go. Felt very "born to be wild" turned clear eyed observation of poetic thought. The visine came in handy huh?~rofl.

Sincerely,
Reg

passing shadows
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7 posted 2002-07-29 08:29 AM


damn, I love your stuff!
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2002-07-29 04:54 PM


regina..
yep darn clorine turns em red for sure...thanks ms fine, just doin research on the early clinton years..yours truely D
passing shadows, thanx for the reads and re's sure appreciate you.

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