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Open Poetry #21

I Still Do

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-07-26 10:59 AM

I still have the dream.

The one where you love me.

Where the mountain
covered in mist
stands tall in the background
dripping snow in waterfalls.

I still do,

and I have to wonder
if it's the mountain view I miss
or you.

WhiteRose 07/02

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

1 posted 2002-07-26 11:20 AM

The capturing of a longing question of love was vividly painted in your words.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-07-26 11:21 AM

Change of perspective...
questioning what seems apparent...
perhaps not.

Well done!

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