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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-07-26 07:00 AM


He is the giver of words
that awaken senses
long forgotten,
to make the meek
fill with sensuality,
and the sexy
turn shy.
He is the giver of words
lighting the day .....
lighting the way...
A special touch
of thought,
of heart,
teaching life lessons
abundant in his wisdom..
through his eyes seen
the world
in dawn of new day....
each day
better
for the gift he gives.....
from the sexy smile
to sexy style,
mixed with heart warmth
and the caring of
eternal friendships....
always true to himself....
his friends.......

teacher
of heart words,
through his minds view....

teacher
of
life,
visited through his words,
a never ending adventure
of journeys into the
lessons of life.

He is sweetness wrapped
in poetic sensuality,

He is the giver of words
and more......


(thanks for always giving,
when it is most needed...hugs
to ya buddie)

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-26-2002 07:02 AM).]

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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2002-07-26 07:06 AM


donna...

you just wiggle in and do it huh?  such a nice gift for a friend, they are lucky to have you as a buddie.  enjoyed it babe

SnickerNicky9686
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since 2002-07-26
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Iowa, Scott Co.
2 posted 2002-07-26 07:38 AM


Gentle Spirit-

That was a great poem and it offered some great visuals. While I was reading your poem visuals just flooded my mind and I want to read more, MORE! It is a great poem , wonderfully done. Keep on posting!

Love,
-Nicole

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-07-26 09:12 AM


Beautiful Donna..such a loving gesture
for your buddie.
Very open and honest....love it!
~Hugs~

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2002-07-26 09:17 AM


This is a splendid piece of poetry
Very beautiful and appicable to all who read it
What a wonderful tribute
Liz

Martie
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5 posted 2002-07-26 11:08 AM


Donna

It must be grand to have a friend as loving as you.  I enjoyed this well done tribute.

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-07-26 04:00 PM


Someone special to you is very fortunate to
have your friendship....A blessing to both
of you...

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2002-07-26 04:08 PM


GentleSpirit~
You certainly live up to your user ID~
This is just lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-07-26 10:02 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just know your buddy is going to love this, sweet friend, you are a true friend to us all and you truly are one of the most giving of words here! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
9 posted 2002-07-26 11:37 PM


And this would be why we know you as Gentle Spirit though we know your name.  Such kind and sincere appreciation is read in these words and all done in a beautiful verse of poetic gratitude for the world to enjoy.  Very enjoyable read and I in this you became the teacher to him.
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