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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-07-26 05:42 AM

I often think of your eyes,
barefoot in four inch heels
on stairs with stares, and
the sandals of a sun dress swaying

at that sea rink of cool, with warmers
on the bare of unsheathed shoulders
where I sent my hands as tall man mantles
and you wore them gift wrap wrapped

where no one noticed your hair was different
when we danced on the pier at ricko's
and you lifted your arms lofty to my neck
without a victoria secret's consideration,

or the cherry of your lips with merlot kiss
that over flowed your mouth brim pout
too wet to dry with terry sleeves
or big joe's monogram linen napkins

I often think of your eyes...

©Dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-26-2002 05:43 AM).]

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-07-26 06:15 AM

at that sea rink of cool, with warmers
on the bare of unsheathed shoulders
where I sent my hands as tall man mantles
and you wore them gift wrap wrapped

your eyes, your hands,
your thoughts.....
what a gift DS, no woman could refuse.
Morning.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-07-26 06:33 AM

can't you print this
on a postcard,
the image, I mean...?

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2002-07-26 06:51 AM

Donna, thanks hon, dream girl in a dream place I suspect.

Sunshine, morning my coffee sip friend, you take the photograph for the card and we will blend them...thanks for the read babe

SnickerNicky9686
New Member

since 2002-07-26

Posts 5
Iowa, Scott Co.

4 posted 2002-07-26 07:45 AM

Dark-

Very good. Loved the poem. Word usage was great, and it was used properly through out the poem. Good job keeping the reader at the edge of their seat wondering what exquisite thing they would read next. Well done.

Love,
-Nicole

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-07-26 08:56 AM

Dark~My eyes saw this clearly.....yessss.
smiling morning eyes~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2002-07-26 09:06 AM

Dark Stranger
That's the way I like my cigars, firm and mellow. Enjoyed

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-07-26 09:34 AM

Good morning, neighbor friend

You unfolded this beautifully!

Indigo
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

8 posted 2002-07-26 01:23 PM

the dance a prelude
she whispers with wine kiss lips
sundress caught by ocean hands
smiles too

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2002-07-26 01:24 PM

nicole, thanks to you for your review, a pleasure to be visited by you.

enchanting one, thank you morning eyes lady, slow hugs to your woman.

sy, thanks my friend, a good robusto would be grand at the moment.

ms martie, hi little neighbor with hugs, meet me at the fence for my morning fix. thanks for the reads babe.

ms indigo...
sundress in wind capture
and was it planned by the wind
or the wearer of sun

thanks lady, a starbucks hug to you

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-26-2002 01:30 PM).]

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-07-26 01:56 PM

DS.....simply awesome....need I say more...

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2002-07-26 02:03 PM

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2002-07-26 03:50 PM

magnus, humble thanks sir!!!
sunshine....damn what nice eyes you have..
thanks hon

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

13 posted 2002-07-26 10:11 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this beautiful poem shines with such romantic beauty and shows though cosmetics and dresses and lipstick may be beautiful, the real beauty shines in the heart and eyes!n (big hugggssssss) I love this, sweet friend, this is sensually beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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