Open Poetry #21 |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Tomorrow, and tomorrow, and tomorrow I’ll pay the bills, I’ll quit the smoke, the wine… the women: they quit on me creeps in this petty pace from day to day and if I cannot get to work on time - the petty pace will cease to be To the last syllable of recorded time; punching out, leave the grind, rush hour - sing the blues And all our yesterdays have lighted fools the way to dusty death. My dad’s retirement died today his heart is fine the doctor’s say Out, out brief candle! The utilities too! Life is but a walking shadow, A walking cane, a silver one, for my some-day graduation a poor player that struts and frets his hour upon the stage and then is heard no more. -peep- -peep- strutting around in my insolence It is a tale told by an idiot, (oogly boogly) full of sound and fury signifying nothing. (neener neener neener!!!) [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (07-25-2002 10:43 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Enjoyed! Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
How true it all is. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
impossible to get replies have to buy them |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I can be bought. *G* Especially when I liked the read! LOL I read it as one poem and as two... either way is a thought provoking snapshot of life and its frustrations... at least until the oogly boogly neener neener part, which is sometimes the only thing we can say to those frustrations. *G* Now... about that payment??? LOL |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Avaunt the jester doth make play with the lines of the immortal bard.Tis cause to bring forth mirth.Verily and forsooth I didst enjoy this romp. paladin |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You simply don't have enough moola to get me to enjoy your poetry more than I do[lah].... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you guys you are generous for sure i didnt mean it to be a general comment but there is so much butt kissing around here it is pathetic. wish mods could clean it up but some of them wouldn't want to. oh and watch them get defensive. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
I prefer warm hugs.Is but kissing worse than back bitting? Your servant,sir paladin,DM "Have keyboard,will surf" paladin |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
you just tell it so...walt-like?! enjoyed this sweets... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wayoutwalt I know the quote by heart it's one of my favorites. Good job and what you say is true. |
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