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bags123
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since 2002-06-06
Posts 128


0 posted 2002-07-25 03:12 PM


Words are too few
to express my love
for you

I've invaded
worlds of poets
in my attempts to
make you feel
my love.

I've conquered
introspection
to translate the marks
you've etched on
my soul.

I've studied
Shakespear's sonnets
hoping to find clues
clinging to the
pages.

Now I know
Words are too few,
Love can't be written





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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-25 03:13 PM


How true. Enjoyed!

Cold hands means a warm heart

WhiteRose
Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-07-25 03:26 PM


Tis true, but we do try. Sweet poem.
Maverick Wolf
Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 94
Scandia, MN
3 posted 2002-07-27 02:02 AM


I don't believe words with more truth have been spoken (written).  Well, I'm sure there have, but these that you have compiled are pretty darn good.  Nice write, great ideas.
bags123
Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128

4 posted 2002-07-27 07:29 AM


Thank you all for reading
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