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Open Poetry #21

The Morning Star

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-07-25 09:51 AM

Would you caress
the morning star
with me?
The last one
in the sky
to run and hide
as the sun splashes
it's rays upon the earth,
would you hold it close
for all it's worth?
For in it's light
I can be found
I'll reach up
and pull it down
but hold it gently
then let it go
for late
into the dawn
again it must glow.

WhiteRose

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2002-07-25 10:12 AM

Very nice and flowing
Twilight is the blending of light and dark
which I always enjoy the transition.
Although I tend toward the nightly transition.

Gloom

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

2 posted 2002-07-25 11:25 AM

This is a very sweet poem!

Neeraja

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