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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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mistress of chanter harmony delicate fragile in flimsy frail tempt me awake with your voice on warbled morning philomel with utterings of bow draw be my violoncello my lute in willow shape frettless of finger's braille let me coddle your tonality your weaker side glowing indulge this key speak jazzer in arpeggio sensuality pray me be your listening evil let me wear the garmenture of your aphrodisiac hymns when you are estrous eye doeing flute me jongle songs of wind then ©Dark |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, you're always so talented at playing the poetic lute, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, I love it, may the wind always speak with eternal whispers to your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
let me coddle your tonality your weaker side glowing indulge this key speak jazzer in arpeggio sensuality I think you coddle us in your sensuality just wonderfuly Ds....and darn it sure is nice to be coddled.....*w* Morning Ds. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
with utterings of bow draw be my violoncello my lute in willow shape frettless of finger's braille ====================== Just as all in life should be......"touch" Well done |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And a very musical good morning to you too Dark. ~slow braille hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What line to pick says speak to me what line to pick O! Harmony... what line to pick? nay, all are mine... they do the trick, emote sublime... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, thank you early bird friend, you bring me greetings and blessings. Donna, let me bring you coffee in the quiet of your thoughts, and a slow hug of thanks Mark, humble thanks my artist friend. Yes touch with thought, with dream, with mind...it is beyond skin. Lady E, slow braille and tremble dance may you wear goose flesh shivers also. Thanks to yoy. Sunshine....good morning ms music, you look lovely in notes and dawn colors. Thanks sweet lady, coffee or tea? [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-24-2002 09:09 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Coffee...with Irish Creme, please.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
mistress of chanter harmony delicate fragile in flimsy frail tempt me awake with your voice on warbled morning philomel with utterings of bow draw be my violoncello my lute in willow shape frettless of finger's braille ======================================== Im running out of words to say how cool and impressive your writes are...and you just keep finding more impressive words, images, and alliterations. this is awesome DS!! my mothy words of praise may be lacking..but they are sincere  |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very nice write.I must admit I had to use my dictionary on a couple of those words.lol |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger, Your arpeggio chords of sensuality sound like whispered music. To some and your symbols fly like water butterflies. You are an able writer. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yes..you are..wonderfully apt in making ANYTHING seem as lovely as the first night stars in a long awaited dream. I adore your words. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
vandana, most humble thanks to you janet marie, your sincere sounds are more grand than my wordy words I could expose, thank you sincerely lil mothy one sodpossum, thanks sir for the read and comments...I appreciate you sy, amigo, thank you and am glad you are back sir. you bless me with your reviews. regina, anything would be pleasure if you were there to whisper the word "adore" thanks hon, you are lady velvet [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-24-2002 12:00 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good Morning, DS I'm late for the music lesson...but took it all in anyway....just the sound of your words is harmony, but mix it up with a sensual thought like you do, and you have harmony and beyond. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hi lil neighbor ms martie.... lady you are such a treat with your replies, can hear you humming along to the tunes or makin your own up...thanks babe |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
sensual upon sensual..  wonderful to savor..  aloha till we meet again....  Poetry is: Passion, imagination and intellect running together. Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa [This message has been edited by CSKpoet (07-24-2002 01:21 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
CSK, aloha and arrigoto....may the waves be warm and tall and the coral as soft cotton thanks ms |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Stranger, Excellent write, sensual the words. Glad I stopped by to read this... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
let me coddle your tonality your weaker side glowing indulge this key speak jazzer You meld your words along the brittle edge, going with the grain... smoothing over the rough spots with a fine touch of sand on paper scraping~ Enjoyed your wood work DS~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Bill, thanks to you sir, pleased to have your review. Bluezy, thanks lady friend for the read and comments, will have to hunt you down and hug ya... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ Such soft sensual serenade~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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