Open Poetry #21 |
If Only To Love You There |
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
For a very special person. You know who you are. Tear-dented whispers still ripple Immersed in a frenzied dream With their dew-covered feathery touch They brush me with love from a queen A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground [This message has been edited by Krishankins (07-24-2002 11:53 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is sweet. Whoever it is will love this Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...lucky lucky lady! ~hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
*sigh* Love it! Love it! A perfect piece, Kris. Sincerely, Titus "They say that a hero can save us. I'm not gonna stand here and wait..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, indeed, that very special person shall know...because we will all keep this at the top until she sees it... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you change gauze to linen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Krishankins - excellent short write with depth of meaning... BC |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Simply stunning Kris. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Have to agree. This is definitely good. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
G's Kris...always the last to know I guess... but *sighs* to you on this one... very purdy... take care sweetie!! Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, and I know that special somebody is going to swoon and sigh when she reads this, sweet friend, may the queen of your heart always share true joy of life with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Stellar, Kris. Really! ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Beautiful...I enjoyed ...very much. DeaDiAmore |
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