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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-07-24 05:10 PM

I'm not sure if I've ever posted the first one, but I wrote this while on vacation last week.

On the road with you
wheels eating up the miles-
turning in my mind
we're on our way to somewhere
we're on our way to something
good
it's highlighted on the evergreens
& the wild flowers by the side
somewhere above where it's blue
& fluffy clouds form interesting shapes
I see it
upon the heated breeze of summer,
I feel it
on the road with you
our own special journey
we're on our way
we're on our way to something good...

~Tier
7/02

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-24 05:46 PM

I like it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-07-24 07:16 PM

Its traveling time, Tier...
I just replied to a traveling poem written by Doreen Peri...
This is totally different from hers but just as wonderful. I love looking at everything from different directions.

~ travelin tramp hugs to you too

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-07-24 08:04 PM

(smiles) Oh Tiersdin, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may you always find everything your heart desires on your lifes journey, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

4 posted 2002-07-24 09:23 PM

Hey, Tier
Hope your destination was half as good as the getting there.

Sounded lovely

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.

Bukowski

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-07-24 09:36 PM

Tiersdin,

At times the roads are inspiring, as these must have been for you to write this telling words of your travels...

BC

powerofthysword
Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 116
Glendale, AZ USA

6 posted 2002-07-24 09:50 PM

This is good, sometimes in our sequacious lives we have to be able to make special trips like this to break the monotony.

Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2002-07-25 01:43 AM

Boy, do I need a vacation!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-07-25 04:03 PM

The refrain reminds me of that song Something Tells Me I'm Onto Something Good.

And the poem confirms it! *Very* something good.

Mikey

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2002-07-25 04:16 PM

sounds like the wheels led to a good place my friend. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-07-25 04:29 PM

Wow Tier, made me feel like I need a vacation!
Just a little getaway..
Good stuff!
~Hugs~

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