Open Poetry #21 |
Sarah, My Love |
iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
A hand lifts down to pick me up As I try to find the hand, I look up. As I look up the sun glares down, Suddenly the person takes away my frown, Glorious as always I look upon her face, Heart already pounding, it started to race. For she was Sarah, Her I knew, Surely either her or I, Did not know what to do. As the wind bristles, Her bangs revealed her gorgeous face. Suddenly I woke up, From this mysterious place, Than I asked myself, How true could it be? For than I knew, That she was the love, For me. |
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iMMuNe Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 49Maine, USA |
This is the second version: Sarah, There is a feelin inside me, Deep within baby I love you My rhymes can’t even describe you. If it’s your luscious lips, Those long legs, perfect hips Or your pretty smile, Whatever it is girl you make me wild. I can’t stop thinking about you, My heart beats everyday Feelin` love for you, This is why I pray Pray to the lord to take me away Away from this place and some way, Put me in the perfect day, When our love will be close. Face to face. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Imune, Try to keep this feeling close, no matter how it all turns out. THIS, is the important part. ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Cold hands means a warm heart |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That was very sweet -- both versions. Said if I only could ... |
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