Open Poetry #21 |
Who is It? |
sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Tis but an image its not really you it must be someone else doing the things you do Lost in your own mystic disguise with your mind offering you alibies Tis but a stranger controlling your action leading you to pleasure and satisfaction Who is this ruler of your very own mind whom allows emotions to inner twine Abandones you to face the circumstances with your pain while he laughs and dances You beg and plead to regain control but your mind has forever been stole |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
STEVIE darling boy where have you been? I’ve missed you so very very much. Your writing is such amazing quality, so beautiful. And remind mama to come here too, I miss her almost as much as I missed you. Ohhh my how beautiful and softly flowing is this exquisite and beautiful poem, it caresses the mind while stirring the senses, truly awesome darling heart. YOU are an amazing writer and this is a jewel of a poem. I love it love it love it utterly utterly utterly WELCOME back darling boy, now the flames will be ignited again darling boy. Watch out for the wench. x x x x and give one of those to mama Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Marsha Thank you so much for your kind words.I've missed you to. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Its so good to see you back here again Stevie.... I have certainly missed you and your mom... and I really love this poem. ~ great big welcome back hugs Lyra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
sodpossom, At times the stranger is in control, to take our minds to do with as he will. Nice write... BC |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I enjoyed this poem!!! Neeraja |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Stevie, A very good poem and its for sure you didn`t learn the word"Tis" from me. Love you, Mama |
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