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sodpossom
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0 posted 2002-07-24 03:09 PM


Tis but an image its not really you
it must be someone else doing the things you do
Lost in your own mystic disguise
with your mind offering you alibies

Tis but a stranger controlling your action
leading you to pleasure and satisfaction
Who is this ruler of your very own mind
whom allows emotions to inner twine

Abandones you to face the circumstances
with your pain while he laughs and dances
You beg and plead to regain control
but your mind has forever been stole

© Copyright 2002 Stevie Houston - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2002-07-24 04:10 PM


STEVIE darling boy where have you been? I’ve missed you so very very much. Your writing is such amazing quality, so beautiful. And remind mama to come here too, I miss her almost as much as I missed you.  Ohhh my how beautiful and softly flowing is this exquisite and beautiful poem, it caresses the mind while stirring the senses, truly awesome darling heart. YOU are an amazing writer and this is a jewel of a poem. I love it love it love it utterly utterly utterly

WELCOME back darling boy, now the flames will be ignited again darling boy. Watch out for the wench. x x x x and give one of those to mama


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

sodpossom
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2 posted 2002-07-24 05:27 PM


Marsha

Thank you so much for your kind words.I've missed you to.

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
3 posted 2002-07-24 05:38 PM


Its so good to see you back here again Stevie....
I have certainly missed you and your mom...
and I really love this poem.
~ great big welcome back hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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4 posted 2002-07-24 09:17 PM


sodpossom,

At times the stranger is in control, to take our minds to do with as he will. Nice write...

BC

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
5 posted 2002-07-25 11:43 AM


I enjoyed this poem!!!

Neeraja

N orth Carolina Girl
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 962
NC,USA
6 posted 2002-07-25 12:54 PM


Stevie,
A very good poem and its for sure you didn`t learn the word"Tis" from me.
Love you,
Mama

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