and this is my song to a girl

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Open Poetry #21

and this is my song to a girl

Permiabilities
Junior Member

since 2002-07-05

Posts 27

0 posted 2002-07-24 05:10 AM

hi all...just made this up on the spot. hope everyone likes it.

and this is my song to a girl,
so soflty asleep in my bed...
here are my words that dance,
across the tip toes of her feet...
and my melody plays upon her dreams...
notes so beautifuly heard...
she fades into a deep rythm...
and the tone of my love,
pressed against her lips...
drifts her deeper into the night.
and the music...
plays on,
and on...

[This message has been edited by Permiabilities (07-24-2002 07:00 PM).]

redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

1 posted 2002-07-24 05:13 AM

i do love this,

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2002-07-24 03:12 PM

I love this too, it's delightful.

Permiabilities
Junior Member

since 2002-07-05

Posts 27

3 posted 2002-07-24 06:58 PM

thank you two for both of your replies....

much thanks

thejingler
Junior Member

since 2002-07-21

Posts 15
NC

4 posted 2002-07-24 10:10 PM

hi all...just made this up on the spot. hope everyone likes it.

A good or bad poem..doesn't matter I say
But your simple honesty has taken the breath of the jingler away

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